祖父
【内容提示】
你的一位亲人，如祖父、祖母，或外祖母、外祖父去世已几年了，但他（或她）临终对你的嘱咐一直在激励着你。你回想一下他（或她）的几件事，并籍此说明你这位亲人是一位忘我工作的人，而对你又是无微不至的关心和爱护。
【作文示范】
My Grandfathr
My grandfathr did about thr yars ago. But his bhaviour①,his spirit and his car for m, ar still in my mind.
My grandfathr was a doctor. H had many good ways to trat disass. H workd with a strong sns of rsponsibility②. On day, Grandpa had a high fvr, groaning③ in bd. But whn h larnd a patint ndd trating, h got up with grat difficulty and bgan to xamin th patint carfully. Whn w saw swat drop down fromhis forhad, our ys wr full of tars.
My grandfathr not only workd hard, but also took good car of m. Whn I was vry young, I livd with him. vry tim I got good marks, a big smil would appar on his fac. If I mt with som difficulty, h would say,“Don＇t los hart, Xiao You. Try your bst. I＇m sur you will succd. ncouragd by his words, I kpt making progrss in my studis. I lovd him and rspctd him too.
On day, Grandfathr was takn to hospital bcaus of a srious illnss. H didn＇t allow Mum to tak m to s him until th day bfor his dath. But whn I got thr, h could hardly opn his mouth. H only stard at m. Aftr som tim h said with grat difficulty,“B…a good…prson.”Ths wr th last words that h had said to m. I noddd in tars.
Th nxt day, h did. I can＇t s him any mor. Dar Grandpa, I will rmmbr your words and b a good prson.
（选自《英语画刊》高中版1997年第11期）
【词语解释】
①bhaviour [bi＇hivj+] n．行为；举止
②rsponsibility [ris?p&ns+＇bil+ti] n．责任；责任心
③groan [gr+un] v．呻吟
【写法指要】
本文用事例记述了“祖父”的行为、精神和对“我”的关心。第一段是引言段，提出篇题。第二至四段写“祖父”的三方面的品质。第二段写“祖父”忘我的工作精神和责任心。第三段写“祖父”对“我”的悉心关怀。第四段写“祖父”临终对“我”的嘱咐。第五段是结束语。[/fly]
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